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Post by pavansuresh on Oct 27, 2015 20:33:54 GMT
A Separate Peace is full of metaphors, and a lot of them are actually very subtle. During the trial, Leper is called in for his near-perfect recall of the events at the tree. He says that he remembers that they were both on the branch, and that "they moved like an engine... first one piston sinks, and then the next one sinks. The one holding on to the trunk sank for a second, up and down like a piston, and then the other one sank and fell." Here, Leper is comparing the movement of Gene and Finny on the branch to an engine with two pistons. However, the simile he uses has applications he could not have thought of. A two-piston engine as he described requires the two pistons to work in harmony, alternating their ups and downs, but entirely supporting each other and causing the car to go. This can be a metaphor for how Gene and Finny's relationship worked before the fall: they were best of friends, supporting each other, having fun, and basically being kids. However, when Gene becomes suspicious and angry at Finny, their relationship falls apart. Gene (even though he may have not done it intentionally) sabotaged their friendship, made Finny fall. An engine that has had one piston stutter and start working worse can stumble along for a slight while longer. However, this stumbling along is often to no avail, as the single piston by itself cannot support the engine: eventually, the suboptimal piston breaks altogether and the entire car breaks down; in this case irreparably.
What other metaphors did you guys see?
-Pavan the Skeptical Elf
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Post by joshualiu on Oct 28, 2015 20:18:34 GMT
I only thought of the basic idea that the engine was meant to explain how Finny fell off the tree, but I found your ideas interesting and really enjoyed reading your elaboration on what a deeper meaning for the pistons could be. And I actually didn't notice how many metaphors there were, but just flipping through chapter 1, I already found a pretty significant one. Gene, as an adult, describes the tree as "a huge lone spike dominating the riverbank, forbidding as an artillery piece, high as the beanstalk" (Knowles 13). The tree is portrayed as this intimidating, looming spike. Gene sees it that way because it represents the pain and misfortune tied to it through Finny's falling off. At the start of Gene's summer session as an Upper Middler, he only sees jumping out of the tree as a false interpretation of the war as something fun and carefree. But once Finny falls off the tree, Gene no longer has this narrow, childlike view. Instead, he then begins to learn how to grow up and is able to view the war for what it really is: something dangerous and scary. Similarly, his view of the tree shifts along with his more realistic view of the tragedies of war.
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Post by colleenstrohlein on Oct 29, 2015 3:13:02 GMT
Another place similes are used is on page 101, after Brinker decides that he is going to enlist in the army, and Gene considers it too. Gene looks up at the sky and sees the stars and says they are "as unromantic as knife blades". He continues to describe the stars as cold and sharp, not the same clouds of stars he used to see back home. This difference in how he used to see the stars and how he sees them now symbolizes how when he was home he was relaxed and didn't have to make tough decisions, but when it comes to the war there aren't any easy ways out. Specifically, when the stars are compared to knife blades, it highlights the danger in the decision that he makes. Furthermore, using stars instead of other objects was important because they can be seen from anywhere and should be constant, but they instead they vary based on his mindset. because If he chooses to enlist, he won't have the same comfort and warmth he feels when he looks at the stars at home. In this paragraph by using a simile Knowles forces the reader to imagine the harshness and seriousness of war.
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Post by Ms. McGettigan on Oct 30, 2015 0:29:03 GMT
Great examples, and awesome analysis of them! Metaphors and similes abound throughout the novel, and I am fascinated by Knowles' choices in diction and the objects he uses to compare. They are very often "stop and think moments" because it's not what you would naturally think...and you know how I love those moments!
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Post by Tylan Benson on Oct 7, 2019 22:25:18 GMT
i think that knowles is not being real with us G.
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